i think the girl's body on the right is too big for her head, and i think you can take out the neon reflections on the table.
you've also got tangents with the top of the left girls arm and the rail, and the liqour bottle and rail (top of teh bottle, bottom of the cap), right of the left girls glass and railing.
I'm not sure if you edited this since Frank commented, but I'm not bothered by any of that (liqour bottle and rail being the exception) girl on right's head is about 2/3 of upper arm which seems right (I don't see anything wrong with stretching her out a little for elegance since it still looks right)this is a really awesome piece.
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Nice illustration. I wish I could see the details too. The guy on the left seems cute!
Beautiful man, love how smooth and clean it is. Sweet lighting and cityscape too.
It turned out great! Really love the colors :)
thats bad ass allen!
Daaam! These are sooo hottt!!!!!
Very cool bro..I can really feel the mood with your colors
i think the girl's body on the right is too big for her head, and i think you can take out the neon reflections on the table.
you've also got tangents with the top of the left girls arm and the rail, and the liqour bottle and rail (top of teh bottle, bottom of the cap), right of the left girls glass and railing.
really like the left two figures
I'm not sure if you edited this since Frank commented, but I'm not bothered by any of that (liqour bottle and rail being the exception) girl on right's head is about 2/3 of upper arm which seems right (I don't see anything wrong with stretching her out a little for elegance since it still looks right)this is a really awesome piece.
Nice work, Allen! This looks different than most of the stuff I've seen you do. It's really sharp looking. Nice mood with the colors too.
This is amazing dude! Right on!
wow... this one is awesome!! I love your sketches.
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